Matthew Tshoi
Eng 57
Like the sun I shine ever so bright,
Like the sun I blind people out of my sight,
Like the sun I am free
Like the sun I am full of energy,
I'll walk around and make people run because,
Like the sun I'll burn you,
a lot of people can't see it but I can because
like the sun, me and you really do have a lot in common.
I like the last line of the poem. It ends the poem really well. We knew he had a lot in common with the sun by using a lot of similes.
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